Writing a good paragraph goes beyond just writing a certain number of sentences on the same topic. Every sentence should have a different pattern or style to keep the reader interested and engaged. To practice this concept, the "Awesome Authors and Artists" classes had fun brainstorming the names of real places backwards, and writing about what the new crazy-named places would be like. Enjoy these samples, and see if you can figure out what the names originally were!
Eropagnis, by Vivian (4th grade)
Eropagnis is a beautiful environmentally-healthy island in the middle of the Pacific Ocean. Its wildlife is a natural wonder, with lush forests growing plentifully. While visitors enjoy the beauty, they can also sip wonderful juices made of delicious fruits. During the busiest visitor hours, friendly locals love to help tourists find their way. For all travelers who love wildlife, lush greens, healthy snacks, and zero pests, this would be the dream location.
Kroy Wen, by Carl (5th grade)
Kroywen is a vast sunny country with lots of space for fun activities. Because of the warm weather, it is great for farming year-round. As the sun beats down upon Kroywen, you can hear children laughing in thedistance. It is a very pretty environment with beautiful things all around. So if anyone LOVES fruits and vegetables, pretty environments, and fun activities, they have found the perfect vacation destination.
Eessennet, by Allison (4th grade)
Eessennet is a beautiful and sunny wonderland located on a seaside shore. It is full of luxurious hotels, bustling markets, and tourist-friendly attractions. Because of the ocean, there are many exhibits available to the public at a low price. During the early morning hours, visitors can climb to the rocky peak and watch the sunrise. Anyone looking for a cozy, welcoming vacation spot is recommended to visit Eessennet.
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