Tuesday, October 29, 2024

Super Sentence Writing!

 My budding and awesome authors classes started the session off with a very important lesson in grammar, and how we can use the various parts of speech to make our writing more interesting to read.  Through adjectives, adverbs, clauses, and phrases, we can paint the perfect picture in our readers' minds of exactly what we want them to see.  And that is what good writers do!

We started off with learning that a sentence just needs 5 things to be a sentence:

1. A capital at the beginning

2. A mark of punctuation at the end

3. A noun

4. A verb

5. A complete thought

Once we learned that, we looked at this boring sentence:

The puppy licks.

It's a sentence, but it's boring!  It lacks detail.  So we added a direct object, two adjectives, an adverb, a "where" phrase, and a "when" clause or phrase.   Look at the improvements across the grades!

by Cora (3rd grade)

by Bella (3rd grade)

by Marlo (4th grade)


by Mabel (5th grade)






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