Friday, November 3, 2023

Super Sentence Writing!

 My younger authors started the session off with a very important lesson in grammar, and how we can use the various parts of speech to make our writing more interesting to read.  Through adjectives, adverbs, clauses, and phrases, we can paint the perfect picture in our readers' minds of exactly what we want them to see.  And that is what good writers do!

We started off with learning that a sentence just needs 5 things to be a sentence:

1. A capital at the beginning

2. A mark of punctuation at the end

3. A noun

4. A verb

5. A complete thought

Once we learned that, we looked at this boring sentence:

The sun shines.

It's a sentence, but it's boring!  It lacks detail.  So we added two adjectives, an adverb, a "where" phrase, and a "when" clause or phrase.   Look at the improvements across the grades!


by Autumn (1st grade)


by Brandon (1st grade)


by Iris (2nd grade)

by Vedant (3rd grade)



by Sara (4th grade)








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