My returning students were very excited to play this On Demand Writing Game (think Monster Draw a few months back!) where they get instant feedback on the importance of descriptive language and adjectives! Here's how you play:
Step #1: Draw a snowman, complete with background and plenty of colors.
Step #2: Describe your snowman and scenery with adjectives that tell size, shape, color, and number. Make sure your writing can be read! Don't leave out a single detail, because....
Step #3: Trade papers, and draw your partner's snowman as they try to draw yours!
Winners were voted on by the class. Enjoy this set of amazing artwork and writing!
Marlo's Snowbird (5th grade)
My snowbird has a round white belly with a light cloudy blue head that slowly fades into white. On its belly, it has 20 short thin lines about as long as the nail on your pinky finger. The lines are dark blue.
My snowbird has a long, dark green, thin leaf for a wing, with lots of thin veins.
It has a little orange carrot for a beak and a tiny sesame seed that is brown for the eye. On the back of the head, there are three ovals poking out of the head. The ovals are horizontal and the middle oval is longer than the others. They are light green and a tiny yellow flower is poking out of the top of the middle oval.
The tail is a long-stemmed flower with two leaves, one on each side. The stem and leaves are light green with a tiny white flower on the end.
There is a wiggly light blue line behind the bird at the height of the neck. There are two more short light blue lines in front of the bird. In the sky, there are eight dark blue snowflakes evenly distributed.
* It's facing your left.
* The whole thing is outlined in black.
* The whole bird is about the size of your hand.


Cora's Snowman (4th grade)
My snowman is really simple. Start by drawing two circles: the bottom one is big and the top one is small. Then, add three circular buttons on the top one, about the size of a pinky nail, so really small. This 2/3 of a snowman is kind a on the RIGHT side of the paper. It has two stick arms coming from the middle (top) circle. Do not fill in! Two twigs are coming from the sticks at the ends. Add a line for the ground right under your big snowball.
Next, draw the poor head on the ground about an inch away fro the 2/3 snowman. The head is an inch around. It has two eyes, same shape and size as the buttons. Add a small frown in the appropriate place. Add seven circles in the sky, same shape and size (scattered). Now, trace everything in black pencil. Add shadows on everything on the right side. Color the buttons red, the arms brown. Add six PINK snowflakes like this * in between the circles in the sky.
Draw a small-medium circle at the top of your page, but leave enough space for the Santa hat. Draw the Santa hat curving the "right" way in a red color. Next, connect the fist-sized medium circle with the upper one. Leave enough space for the base, big circle. Draw the big circle connected to the medium circle. Below that, draw two elf shoes pointing sideways. Color them dark green, and add one little yellow circle on both the shoes.
Now, draw a scarf connected between the most top circle with the Santa hat and the medium circle. Make two parts of the scarf hanging down on the right side. Color the sarf in the pattern of a peppermint candy cane. Red, white, red, white. Draw two little circles on the second circle for the buttons and then two more on the third. Now, draw two brown sticks poking out of the middle circle. Add three fingers on each stick in brown. In the left and right hands, draw a candy cane, white, red, white, red. For the face, draw two cutie eyes only 1-2 inches apart from each other. An orange carrot nose with three lines sticks out in the middle. Draw eight dots in gray for the mouth (smile)! For the background, draw eight sky blue snowflakes around the page. Finally, outline the snowman in sky blue. You're done!








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