Saturday, December 17, 2022

Persuasive Writing: Let's Vote!

 Near election day, we learned the art of persuasive writing by creating a proposition to vote for, or by running for a government office, and persuading others to vote for us!  We discussed that each short essay should have an introduction, a body paragraph with more detail, and a conclusion with a "sell it"/persuasive sentence included.  Enjoy these great ideas!


  Prop 333 by Armin (5th grade)


Have you ever seen homeless people on the streets just sitting and suffering? Prop 333 will give the homeless places to live, food, clothes, dietary needs, and a community that cares.

First, Prop 333 will give homeless people places to live by using tax money to build more shelters. There will also be a service created to drive around and gather them to be later transported to a shelter. We will also create a donation to pay for the clothes, food, and dietary needs. Several people have volunteered to live at the shelter with the homeless and take care of them along with many doctors keeping them healthy. 

Ultimately, this will get the homeless off the streets and a place that they can call home. If you want to stop seeing people suffering on the streets, vote yes on Prop 333.  


Elise for President! (5th grade)

        Can you imagine what it would be like if a smart, productive, and collaborative GIRL president was elected for office?  Well, that will happen if you wisely vote for Elise!

        Have you ever walked outside of your house and smelled the very unhealthy smell of smoke?  Voting for me would completely get ride of that horrible smell.  If you're a person that likes the smell of smoke, consider it again for it has been proven that smoke is toxic and damages your lungs.  I would also have a more prioritized goal of protecting the Earth than any other presidents, because I believe that having a healthy and eco-friendly planet for the next generation is crucial.  Next, I will create a goal to fight fairly for rights.  It doesn't matter matter what you look like or any other things that you think is negative, because everyone is created equally by God.  Finally, an issue that I will address is also the problem of low pay rates for jobs.  For example, some teachers are not paid like other teachers are, which is not fair.  This can cause lives to deteriorate (make or become worse).  I will address all these issues, and many other ones.

        So if you want a president who makes your job super fun and fights for the fair rights of the people, vote for the ultimately awesome Elise!


Titus for President (4th grade)


Hi, I’m Titus, a hardworking and focused, and I’m running for president. Although I’m going to need your help to get votes. I’m going to tell you some things I’ll probably do if I win.

 

I think we should increase fines for littering on nature, or on city property, and promote recyclable material. Think about it! If you litter, that means more repairs, which cost MONEY$$$, meaning I, the president, get less money to spend on more important things, like funding and productions. Do you want that? Definitely NOT right? I know I’m so smart.


Anyways back to what I was saying, if you want a happy, stress free environment, then I STRONGLY encourage you to vote for me, TITUS!



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